Write a rationale in which you identify the changes you made to the original text and explain how those changes affect the text’s meaning.

The paper is divided ito two parts:
First 2 pages
Choose a scene from the text and revise it in order to have it express a new message about home, leaving home, or returning home. You may write the revision in the form of a story. Most revisions should be approximately 2 pages; some may be a bit longer.

Second 2 pages
In order to explain what revisions you made and why, please write a 2-page rationale specifying changes and how these changes would affect the meaning of the story.

PROCESS GUIDELINES
2. Figure out what message the scene is currently giving.
3. Decide how you would like to change the message to better fit contemporary times.
4. Brainstorm ways you might change the original scene to modify the message. Consider setting, character, plot, conflict, speech, and so forth.
5. Decide the format for your revision (story) and write a draft.
6. Write a rationale in which you identify the changes you made to the original text and explain how those changes affect the text’s meaning. Use standard features of an essay (introduction that identifies the project and the main points you’ll be making; body paragraphs to elaborate on 2-4 main points; and a conclusion). Use first person (“I”) rather than calling yourself “the author.”
7. Revise your text revision and your rationale, being sure to check the grading rubric for guidelines.
9. Once your paper is strong in terms of content and organization, proofread and edit to make your writing is clear, direct, concise, and correct.

(please make sure that all the information in the table was included in the paper )

PAPER GUIDELINES
Exemplary Competent Unsatisfactory
Rationale—content Clearly and accurately identifies the message of the original text. Clearly and accurately explains how the message about home, leaving home, or returning home was changed Clearly and accurately traces the way the various changes in the text contribute to the changed message. Somewhat identifies the message of the original text. Somewhat explains how the message about was home changed. Somewhat traces the way the various changes in the text contribute to the changed message. Either does not identify the message of the original text; or does not explain how the message about home was changed; or does not trace the way the various changes in the text contribute to the changed message.
Rationale–readability Well-organized, with an intro, body paragraphs, and a conclusion; well-suited for people who had read the original text; stylistically strong; virtually error-free Body paragraphs used to organize ideas; some attention given to audience; some errors, but still fairly clear writing Page requirement not met; ideas not clearly organized into paragraphs; writing is unclear and or impedes comprehension due to number of errors
Creative Revision Clearly connects to original text. Changes original text in substantive and sensible ways. Changes to the original text to provide a new message about home, leaving home, or returning home. Writing is entertaining, thoughtful, and readable. Connects somewhat to original text. Changes original text in somewhat substantive and sensible ways. Changes to the original text give a somewhat new message about home, leaving home, or returning home.Writing is somewhat entertaining, thoughtful, and readable. Either does not clearly connect to original text; barely changes original text; does not change message about home; or lacks elements that make the writing entertaining, thoughtful, and readable.


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