SOURCES: Please exclude the sources that talk about (gay-marriage, cohabitation) as this essay will not talk about them
CUSTOMIZE CONTENT: – the introduction needs to be clear saying that it will talk about the changes in the UK family by looking at marriage, divorce and lone parent families only. it also needs to say how it will explain these changes.
– the main body of this essay needs a lot of changes , focus on the 3 changes only and talk about them in details, with evidence (sources), statistics from the ONS (office of national statistics) please talk about them in details.
OTHER: please make the following changes to this essay:
1) Talk ONLY about these 3 changes ( marriage, divorce , and lone parent families) in details. Giving examples and evidence and statistics.
2) Talk about the nuclear family in the essay and explain why it was important after the world ward and why people idolized it.
3) Talk about the women roles how they have changed ? women in labor force, women working at management positions , women in education . show figures of statistics and prove it.
4) Talk about the mentality that changed towards marriage from.
5) Talk about how feminists and conservatives views towards the family structure with evidence please.(important)
6) Define terms that needs to be defined like (nuclear family, lone parent families, marriage, divorce)
7) remember to view these changes from an interdisciplinary approach. ( economy, political science, history, social science)
8) never start the paragraph with an evidence, each paragraph should start with a topic sentence saying clearly what the paragraph is going to talk about.
9) Talk about each change ( marriage, divorce, lone parent families) in detail with evidence and examples.
10) Don’t forget to mention everything you are going to talk about and how in the introduction clearly..