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“in some cultures, parents compare their children’s grades with others throughout school. After high school, the parents move on to the comparison of their children’s job, boyfriends or girlfriends, and husbands or wives, thus creating a stressful environment for the children involved.”
Critically evaluate this way of thinking and indicate your agreement or disagreement with this approach. In addition, please state your preferred approach and the reason for it.
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In introduction i need clear hook,bridge and thesis-statement.
Beginning of each paragraph needs clear topic sentences.
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related to Chinese articles or Chinese sources.
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My essay should be based on a agree side
** I think i can show that this method of parents comparing their children in education, jobs and personal relationship is good for their children. Because it helps children work harder and try to get better grades in the school, it can encourage children to improve themselves to find a great job and get some achievements in their working life and it will help children to become a more responsible person.(please use this too)
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