This is the only/last shot I have in keeping my job with “Thumbtack.com”, where I’m a Life-Coach (which includes the titles of Therapist, Counselor, and Spiritual Counselor – all of which I have extensive experience and a strong, natural talent for). However, whenever I quote a client who posts on Thumbtack, I am always passed over. My quotes have grown stronger, but I lack the ability to write concisely and effortlessly as all of my competition, and all of whom have dozens of reviews, pictures, and full summaries to supplement their quotes. However, I will make a profound stride forward if I can truly impress with this essay – not only with it’s footnotes, research, professionalism, and so much more, but because I myself suffered excruciatingly w/ social phobia, serious depression, weight problems, extreme anxiety, and emotioanl trauma during all 4 years of high school. Yet, during college, I was able to adopt the best/most successful habits, and eventually shed all of my diagnoses… something many of my doctors are still scratching their heads over. Because I directly experienced all of these diagnoses/symptoms and eventually conquered them (I knew that I had no choice feeling suicidal ideation, so I literally put forth ALL of my determination and put into practice the most successful habits). Sooner than I thought, they slowly dissipated permanently. I don’t know if I should put this in this essay (unless you can do so convincingly, since this part is definitely true)…. Anyway, the whole key to this essay is to not only look ultra-professional and tip-topped researched, BUT TO CONVINCE. I NEED THE CLIENT WHO READS THIS TO BE FORCED TO TAKE IT SERIOUSLY; TO BE ABSOLUTELY OVERWHELMED THAT THIS IS THE KEY – THE KEY THAT WILL PROVIDE THEM HOPE AND RELIEF AFTER SO MANY YEARS, DOCTORS, AND A FEELING OF WASTING THEIR LIVES… ESPECIALLY THEIR BEST OR PRIME YEARS. I WANT THIS ESSAY TO CONVINCE, MANIPULATE, AND USE EVERYTHING POSSIBLE TO SHAKE THE CLIENT AND PERSUADE HIM THAT I AM THE PERSON TO HIRE – BECAUSE OF WHAT HE HAS READ. BECAUSE HE BELIEVES SO DEEPLY AND KNOWS THAT I SUFFERED JUST AS HE DID – ONLY TO CONQUER IT WITH THE BEST/MOST SUCCESSFUL HABITS. YOU CAN “FUDGE”, FABRICATE, STRETCH THE TRUTH, USE POWERFUL RHETORICAL LANGUAGE – EVERYTHING ELSE YOU CAN POSSIBLY THINK OF….
BUT THE REASON I AM PAYING THIS AMOUNT FOR TAKING A CHANCE IS THAT THIS NO DOUBT WILL NOT BE EASY. FOR ON ONE HAND, IT MUST CONVINCE UNERRINGLY,