SOURCES: The citations for the paper is incorrect. Please use MLA format. Also in the body of the paper, the page number should be listed next to the source.
FORMAT: The first paragraph needs a clear thesis statement. Also, the focus on the paper is not Okonkwo. Please change the body of the paper to mention less about Okonkwo and more about the women.
I didn’t see a solid controlling idea of the paper. Please update this as well.
GRAMMAR: I saw more than a few grammar and spelling issues. Please use a max of 4 sources.
INSTRUCTIONS NOT FOLLOWED: Please write more about the women and a lot less about Okonkwo.