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I have got a project on Business Information Technology. my topic is \”Mobile Parking App\” analysis report.

MY TARGET is MELBOURNE CBD AUSTRALIA , MY RESEARCH QUESTION IS • How can the current mobile parking applications be improved with the objective of increasing its effectiveness reducing time wastage.

i have already started and i have a draft but the problem is i got a very negative feedback from my lecturer. and i need help to improve my report based on the given feedback that i got from my lecturer.
i have attached my draft document called(projec draft mubarak 27may 2016 – with feedback) including feedback comments on it that you need to work on in order to improve it. also, i have attached the voice record called(Parking App Week 11)of the meeting that i had with my lecturer that you need to hear in order to understand more what she want exactly. i have attached word document called (feedback instructions)that includes the changes and instruction i need to follow as well to improve the research. Finally, i have attached also the marking criteria for you.
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