When I wrote this research paper, I jut got the feedback from the instructor. he says :
“I don’t understand what you are arguing in this essay. This feels like more of a traditional essay to me. Remember that this is not a traditional research essay where you simply present information about the problem and possible solutions or what is being done about the problem. This is an argument essay where you need to argue that the problem exists and that solution you propose is the best solution. Remember to focus on argumentation. In addition, remember that you need to include a presentation of your action. This is an actual action that you did to help actualize that solution. What is your action? What did you do to address this problem and help bring about the solution? How did it go? Was it effective?” .

Can you rewrite or edit what instruct said? I will also send the files that you need