Discuss about Childhood obesity

Revise your thesis.
2. Revise and edit your paper.
3. Read the handout on MLA and make corrections.
4. Submit a rough draft.
Revising Your Thesis File
Many times, the root of problems with your paper is simply a weak thesis. A thesis may not directly argue one position, or may be too broad. Take a look at another list of suggestions and examples, this one from Indiana University.

Revising and Editing File
Here are some Revising and Editing tips from the 8th Edition of Little, Brown. Also see pp. 246-249 in your text.

MLA Advice File
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