i’m creating a presentation that will have the aim of investing in several asset classes (i.e. real estate, private equity, money market, etc..).
Could you please have a look at the attached file and work on enhancing the wording of page 8 titled “Vision”.
My main issue is with the last 2 points. I find them to be more of statements rather than points that clarify the vision of the fund.

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