This are the professor’s comment on the paper and the corrections needed.
• The reseach question that was approved should be the title of the paper
• Anytime statements are made on factual information make sure you have a reference to back up the statement. You thoughts or opinions are not a reliable source. Without a reference to back it up.
• Always write in paste tense
• Check APA for proper punctuation on citation with in the body of the paper