SOURCES: Revise the sources and exclude the out of topic sources( gay, lesbian, cohabitation)
CUSTOMIZE CONTENT: the introduction needs to show how this essay will explain the changes.
the main body should never start with according to …….. it should always start with a topic sentence explaining what each paragraph is going to talk bout.
OTHER: Please revise this paper carefully and make the following changes:
1) make the introduction clear and clearly state how you are going to explain the changes.
2) Talk about the changes in the UK family structure and only include these changes: Marriage, divorce and lone parent families. ONLY these 3 changes and talk about them in DETAILS explaining them clearly with examples and statistics from the ONS (office of national statistics).
3) Never start the paragraph with an evidence, always start with a topic sentence.
4) Define terms where necessary like the nuclear family, lone parent families with a source of the definition.
5) Talk about these 3 changes in details please.
6)Talk about the women role that led to this change by proving the percentage of women in labor, education, and management positions nowadays.
7) Make it clear that you are talking about these changes using an interdisciplinary approach.
8) The essay am uploading have some key points but needs more expanding on areas of divorce, women roles, attitudes towards marriage and lone parent families.
9) Please exclude the parts that talk about gay-marriage and cohabitation and use the words to expand more on the 3 changes( marriage,divorce,lone parent families).
10) The main body of this essay needs a lot of changes with little changes to the introduction.
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